Not a bad poem ... you can tell that this poem came from the heart it shows the true beauty of your writing

Amazing poem. 5/5 i love the style and structure of this poem. well done. keep writing. ur poem is wonderful and shows the talent that u have. =)

Awesome poem baby :) love it.. but it's painful too :( I still love it your amazing at writing :) 5/5

Beautifully written. Nice style. Very sad, but something alot of people will relate to. Thank you for sharing something so personal!!

Godbless
Sammib

I felt how you felt at the moment great word play also it all fits toghter....i have one issue though.......WRITE MORE =P

~king drake

I liked it and i'm sorri about what happened and i liked it u have a gift of turning talent into art keep it up