Silent Lucidity

by Whitey   Sep 28, 2006


The light shines bright from your green eyes
I can sense myself with no disguise
The love we share has been apprised
Pleasant surprise, pleasant surprise

Hold me tight, become my shelter
Flow through the night where love concurs
The storm of life will not deter
Our love incurs, our love incurs

Wrapped in silent lucidity
Our hearts and bodies now agree
Escaping so no one can see
Just you and me, just you and me...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    I agree with the others the repition adds emphasis and adds to the feel of the poem.very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I liked this one, the repetition was a good idea, it really caught my eye. Very powerful. 5/5 =]]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I already left a mega-comment on your other poem, so i'll keep this one shorter ; ). you seem to have a real ability to make these poems smooth and natural. i love the repetition of the last lines in this one. cool stuff!

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