Wow, there are some really cool parts to this! for the most part, it's very fluent and professional. the first two stanzas were especially sweet, i thought, and i really enjoyed the lines

"There was a rosebush, last to die
Beneath the withering Winter eye"

nice! there were a lot of slant poems, but that's alright, i think. there were only a couple areas where the rhythm was more awkward, like "But, o! Alas! The harsh winter
Did bid them seek a cold shelter." the emphasis, if you were to keep to the rhythm, would be win-TER, shel-TER, which is a weird way of saying them, but that's being really picky, and it looks like you have the talent to make it whatever you want. anyways, this comment is getting reeeeally long. good job! i really liked this poem.

That was a very powerful poem once again. But, you should fix the second last line, if you tried adding quotations or something, than they are automatically changed. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

That was extremely well put! i really liked it because it flowed fluently, although maybe the emphasis was a little kinda wierd. anyways, WELL DONE!

I really enjoyed reading this ,the wording was superb ,the imagery was wonderful The quotations threw me a little,nothing a quick edit couldn`t fix.......great job!