by Misstress
Lovely. |
by Nee
OMG!!!!!!! I REALLY need these words in my life!!!!! |
by dora
HEy darl a very heartelt poem. great use of words in this. always love readin ur work. very well written and structured. keep em coming xx |
When something like this comes right from the bottom of heart, it really doesnt matter if it rhymes or not...and what you wrote here is felt by my soul...great write |
by shadowlight
This peice is fantastic, truely the content is well presented and everything so powerfully conveyed. |
by Bridgette
I love this poem. It was very beautifully written and it is very deep. Great job on this. I can definitely relate to this. Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Natalie
Oh my. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this piece. You chose amazing wording to give the poem that extra effect. The emotions were very heartfelt and warming and flowed beautiful together. Very nicely done! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Yu Lee
If Love is like Roses,then what about its thorns..I really like that line. It has a nice ring to it and its very creative. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is great. 5/5 |
by Kristina
Aww wow i really like tihs poem a lot. very deep and beautiful. you did a wonderful job on it. very well written poem. keep it up! 5/5 |
I find this poem very soothing for the soul. Wonderful job hun 5/5 |
by Letty
Awwww!!!!!!!!!! This was so beautiful! you really have a way with words. I felt all the deep and strong love and desire that you put into this poem. It really is a magnificent work of art. The flow was wondrful and the words had me feeling like I was in a whirlwind. This poem captured me from the beginning to the end and then it had me wanting so much more. you have done it again my friend, you are just simply amazing. 5/5 Keep writing these beautiful, talented pieces of romance. |
Lovely poemmmmmmmmmmm |