Prayer in the night

by tinna   Sep 28, 2006


Words were spoken,
hearts were broken,
you and i both know that wasn\'t the Case, we both preferred our own space.or so i thought? but that was a lesson i probably had to be taught..

why'd you leave me in the rain that night? i cant handle shame and i cant bear to fight, another day another night, another person to please, another day waiting for the light.

i wish you'd come back and hold me like you use to do, just the sky the wind and us two, you're gone forever or so i think, until i wake up and find a paper with your handwriting and ink.

so now I'll turn my head and dream again and when i wake, if i wake,
i pray that I'll see you again

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  • 17 years ago

    by FASHIONISTA

    This is excellent, in your spare time you should turn it into a song, it would be perfect song lyrics, i love it

    vanesa;Ox

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Excellent work. I was really brought into it. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Lots of emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily Jo

    This is a lovely poem. its awesome.
    and about my gf. she is now my ex gf. we broke up...it was a sad break up :(
    but thats for the comments on my poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Ay u comment my poems askine me to read ur poems...this is really gd i lykd it felt powerfull...love me xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    A great poem;)
    full of emotion and the ryming is done very well. keep the good work up.