Wonderful poem, you could imagine the relationship in the poem.

So emotional, so beautiful.. i shed a tear for this poem keep up the good work

Very good! Your heart speaks through you well. 5/5

I know how u feel there. my ex left me and now all i want is him back. its wonderful,the poem i mean. i love it!!

Ah the good ol' ex. you will overcome this hurdle. u will miss him and it will hurt. but the fight will only make you stronger :) take care of yourself.

I know how it feels to lose a love and how hard it is atfirst, but after a while u get strong and you dont hurt anymore. excellent job 5/5 i felt your pain in the poem

A great poem;)
full of emotion and the ryming is done very well. keep the good work up.

Ay u comment my poems askine me to read ur poems...this is really gd i lykd it felt powerfull...love me xoxo

This is a lovely poem. its awesome.
and about my gf. she is now my ex gf. we broke up...it was a sad break up :(
but thats for the comments on my poems.

Excellent work. I was really brought into it. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Lots of emotion.

This is excellent, in your spare time you should turn it into a song, it would be perfect song lyrics, i love it

vanesa;Ox