by Melissa Sep 28, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
My dreams are irrational |
by Cuddles
WOW!! I would say more, but when you write like this, it's all I can say. |
by N M Lambert
Love this, you are meaningful beyond words in your poetry. the structure fits in excellently with the message of the poem.. xx |
Wow.This has qualities of reality and surreality.Dreams and life don't always match-never stop dreaming, hoping, no matter how mundane life is.This is written so well-slightly different than your usual style.It seems you have a great capacity for love and hope that you are waiting to come true-trust me, sometimes when you aren't seeking love, it finds you.I have faith that love and happiness will find such a beautiful soul as yours eventually.You are special, your poems show that,Have faith in love, in yourself, in life.I love the metaphors and honesty in it. The ending is very good. |
by Bill Turner
Your poetry is brilliant. This poem is deafening in its questioning, it's challenge and it's beauty. Great job! |
by swill
Amazing...absolutely stunning melissa.....I know what this poem means EXACTLY. |