Amazing...absolutely stunning melissa.....I know what this poem means EXACTLY.
Read my poem Reckless Eloquence....and if you dont think that we share the same mind while writing our poems, I'll change my name!
BTW thanks for your comment on Night...

hey, and i didnt understand the frivolous theory part....but i totally totally loved the end and the second stanza. :D
Amazing write...dhaval

Your poetry is brilliant. This poem is deafening in its questioning, it's challenge and it's beauty. Great job!

Wow.This has qualities of reality and surreality.Dreams and life don't always match-never stop dreaming, hoping, no matter how mundane life is.This is written so well-slightly different than your usual style.It seems you have a great capacity for love and hope that you are waiting to come true-trust me, sometimes when you aren't seeking love, it finds you.I have faith that love and happiness will find such a beautiful soul as yours eventually.You are special, your poems show that,Have faith in love, in yourself, in life.I love the metaphors and honesty in it. The ending is very good.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Love this, you are meaningful beyond words in your poetry. the structure fits in excellently with the message of the poem.. xx

WOW!! I would say more, but when you write like this, it's all I can say.