Wow, that was so powerful. It was filled with emotion and your descriptions painted a vivid picture in my mind. Keep it up! 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Omg this is amazing! the rhyming is so natural and it reminds me of the puritans. that might be because ive been studying the puritans but anyway. its easy to see the pain and the way that the lines are phrased are incredible. excellant job.

Alot of deep feelings of pain in this poem. The way you have written this brings me right into what you are feeling. Excellent writing! Take Care Cindy

Very nice and beautiful