Lonely

by Tawny   Sep 28, 2006


Have you ever felt so lonely,
Where you thought no one was there?
You just sat in that dark corner,
Counting the wasn't fair.
Have you ever told yourself your life's not worth it,
And in this place you didn't belong.
Have you ever tried telling the one you love,
That you messed up, you were wrong?
Have you ever felt so lonely,
Where you was hoping you would die?
Wondering if anybody really cared,
Then a tear fell from your eye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I like it... someone voted a 1 for this?!?! -shoocked-

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    This poem is good and does not deserve a 1. I don't know who down voted that but that was really stupid of them. Overall it was a good deep poem. So don't think this is a bad poem because it's not. Good job with this 5/5 to get that overall rating up but truthfully it's a 4.5. Keep writing.