This poem is good and does not deserve a 1. I don't know who down voted that but that was really stupid of them. Overall it was a good deep poem. So don't think this is a bad poem because it's not. Good job with this 5/5 to get that overall rating up but truthfully it's a 4.5. Keep writing.

I like it... someone voted a 1 for this?!?! -shoocked-