by britt Sep 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Dont tell me that you love her |
Hey your my best friend, and i love your poems!!!! read mine to you, its called "my brittny" |
by Marcus
Great poem you have great work but remember to try to be more consitent on your rythme pattern what ever you start off with try to keep that same pattern thoughout your whole poem, this makes the poem more easier to read and sound so much more smother |