Comments : Stand on your own

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    Great poem you have great work but remember to try to be more consitent on your rythme pattern what ever you start off with try to keep that same pattern thoughout your whole poem, this makes the poem more easier to read and sound so much more smother

  • 18 years ago

    by stacey(cookies)

    Hey your my best friend, and i love your poems!!!! read mine to you, its called "my brittny"