by HeaveNorHELL I AM HERE ON EARTH Sep 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
When I hear the words I love you I hear a lie |
by Love Panda
Rhymes seemed forced nearing the end, but other than that i loved it, cant wait to read more... |
by Marcus
Great poem!!! Remeber in poetry each line have to be back up by some supportive detail,meaning there ceertain things that you must expain more in your work,but great work |