Our Day's Coming

by Tine   Sep 28, 2006


It's almost our day
I've been looking forward to
just be able to stay
and to be with you

I miss you very often
but I can still see you
in my head, an image that's softened
fading away, with every day passed

To feel it, love, becoming
something almost touchable
whenever I'm with you, just talking
is enough to make me glow

I wish time could go faster
then slow down and stop
to keep our moment strong forever
so that I wouldn't have to leave again

Goodbyes I hate the most
'cause then for now it's over
and the day becomes a ghost
until the next time we are closer

than two beings ever were
just you and me together
I wish our day could last forever
I miss you so much it almost hurts

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    Hey very good work , I felt that,Hey remember that poetry is always greater and more effective if you have a consistent rythming pattern ,thats what you have to work on in this poem.but great work