Willow (haiku)

by Biscuit   Sep 28, 2006


Beautiful willow,
dancing in the moonlit breeze;
a graceful foxtrot.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another great poem. I liked it; it is different. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Oooo pretty I like this poem I am horrible at writing haiku poems but you did a Wonderful job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Beautiful willow,
    dancing in the moonlit breeze;
    a graceful foxtrot.
    ^^
    An amazing ending line . It added a very definate grace to the poem .
    Very unique Haiku ....Lovely to read

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Very good haiku. You did a great job of describing it, and i like how you used dancing and a form of it to describe it. Nice write. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Nice poem, very short but also neat. NJ