And over here in London
Over the trellised fence
"Oh bugger" muttered katie
"This poem makes no sense!"
^^

OMG Katie I can leave it up to you to make me smile through your words .

" I understand you have it sir,
That gaining weight is bad"
Although she hadn't thought it
To him it seemed she had

^^^
Very unique stanza Katie, and for some reason I really seem to love it .

((Hugs)) sweet girl

Sense or not, if anything it was funny, and in a lot of ways it measures up to the title. You gave snapshots of different people, in different circumstances, one day of many lifes. It was an interesting poem. Did you intend to write it this way, or was it a product of you just writing freely? Maybe you might concider putting this poem in the funny catogory, mainly because of the ending part, but putting it in this catogory works too. Keep writing your poems.

-Tainted Miko