Shut Up Mother

by Sarah Ann   Sep 28, 2006


Voices rising
Constant crying
Shut up mother, shut up

Tripping; repeating
Her words: flesh eating
Shut up mother, shut up

Unsatisfying
She keeps trying
Shut up mother, shut up

Bodies shaking
Glasses breaking
Shut up mother, shut up

My head is steaming
But you keep screaming,
Just shut up mother, shut up

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  • 18 years ago

    by karen

    I can relate to this so much. my mom is always screaming at me and is never satisfyed.
    good job keep writing.
    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by latoya

    Your poem is cute. I hope you dont tell your mom to shut up though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    This was interesting I dont quite know what to make of it though, I enjoyed it dont get me wrong and i think its a greatly unique and compelling write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Wow. I loved the repitition. I don't really have anything to say. =/ (I NEVER have anything to say..lol)

    [[ Liz ]]