Wow. I loved the repitition. I don't really have anything to say. =/ (I NEVER have anything to say..lol)

[[ Liz ]]

This was interesting I dont quite know what to make of it though, I enjoyed it dont get me wrong and i think its a greatly unique and compelling write.

Your poem is cute. I hope you dont tell your mom to shut up though.

I can relate to this so much. my mom is always screaming at me and is never satisfyed.
good job keep writing.
=)