by veronicaaa Sep 28, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
I pick up my pencil and |
by jello
I agree with the first person who commented |
I liked it but i didnt really understand what the tall dark male had to do with anything in the poem...and umm the last 2 verses kinda fell apart but otherwise it was a great write...ahh well not every poem is perfect i guess...:P |