My Letter To Heaven

by veronicaaa   Sep 28, 2006


I pick up my pencil and
wipe away eraser shavings
i pick up my piggy bank
and count up all my savings

heading to the store
i see your face in the clouds
i have done the best i could
i only wanted to make you proud

i grab the green, glittery pen
the one you always liked
as i pay for my things
i think how much we used to be alike

sitting back at my desk
i look at the clock nearing seven
i put the words I LOVE YOU
and finish my letter to heaven.

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  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    I agree with the first person who commented
    but even with that it's good. i like the last part
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    I liked it but i didnt really understand what the tall dark male had to do with anything in the poem...and umm the last 2 verses kinda fell apart but otherwise it was a great write...ahh well not every poem is perfect i guess...:P

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