Although I am happily a non-religious person....I can say that you convey your message of utmost devotion to your lord with feeling and conviction. I enjoy pieces that eminate the writers emotion.....cause on the internet all you have is words...might as well make them count. 2 thumbs up!

Tara

I really liked that its very true....this is a true poem and some times poeple do lose there way off gods track and go there own way