Nice poem, very well written and full of true emotions, 5/5 from me.
keep up the great job

Like Goran says great poem and full of emotion, and i Notice that you dont prefer the rhyme, even though I dont care about it coz I made poems with and without that just a few thing that is inportant for a great poem is a rhythm
But then this one is good just put a little more rhythm to make the feelings more effective

geneross

This is much better. It has a very lyrical feel, and I imagine there was probably some music in the background that means something personal to you, when you wrote this.

From what I've read of your work you do "upbeat" much much better than you do "sad". Encore! Encore!

Love is really hard to find but when u find it you'll know u have it excellent poem 5/5

Full of heartfelt emtions, I like that. I think you did another excellent job, Your better upbeat, tahn you are sad.