Wow! Very good, i think definitely one of your better poems. Also, I liked that quote on your profile about the person who "turned off the bed and went to lights". Very good.

I specifically wanted to ask you if you would read my one and only poem so far. It's on my profile, of course. I would have E-mailed you, but I couldn't have you replying because the address was my mom's. Anyway, good work!