About you pt.2

by Natasha "rayne"   Sep 29, 2006


Your like the rain
so pure and true
you dance around acing like a fool,thats why i like you.
your always loud and proud.
never once did i see you down.
if you ever frowned, you\'d never let it show.
i guess the happy you is what you want people to know.
not once did i ever see you mad or sad...r trying to act bad.
whever you go the positivity flows.
your the greatest,coolest person i know.
a face i can never forget.
a voice i love to hear.
the greatest person in your years.
your a person god spennt some extra time on.
god gave you a \"one-of-a-kind\" personality, he meant for you to share it with the world.
and you are.
your fullfilling your duty as gods specail gift.
you\'ve shared it with me, with this island.
now go.
get out of here!
annd share it with the rest of the world.

rayne

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I thought this poem was good, but it could be better. A lot of grammar was mis-used, or incorrect. The word 'Your' in most of the places you are putting it should be 'You're.' 'Your' means that it's someone's possession. 'You're' means that 'You are' something. There's a huge difference. Try reading it over and fixing the incorrect places. A lot of the grammar threw me off in a lot of places.

    Other than that, I thought it was ok. It was catchy, lovey dovey, and cute. =P I know where you're coming from. =) Keep it up. 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha
    PS: So sorry it took so long to read these! I totally forgot about the post!