by disturbed one Sep 29, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
This is a true story about someone i know and shes having a really rough time dealing with her parents divorce and tonight i never saw someone that is not bi-polar break down so quickly...she walked outside for like 2 mins came in balling then like 20 mins later was laughing again...but anyways it got my mind goin so heres the result... |
Cuz im loved |
by Jessie
Why the hell are you so popular on here, huh? |
Ya thanks evil...but i dont think there is a way to edit it is there? |
I just read it again and i just want to suggest taking the "ever" out of the last line--- i think that might flow better! Keep writing! |
Another wonderfully written poem! Great job! def 5/5 |