by LadyPearl Sep 29, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Flaming heat twirling gleefully in the night |
by Rachel RTVW
Good job on this form! |
I LOVE ACROSTICS!! this one is beautiful.. such a short word.. i never thought you could make such a great poem from.. another ejoyable read with a wonderful flow and great word choices.. keep up the fantastic work!! |
by Karma Hope
Wowww very short yet very effective, i like it, well done... |
by Liz
Short but really good. I wish I could've written something like this! hehe |
by Bridgette
This is a very good poem. The way that you described fire was absolutely beautiful. Every sentence was very descriptive with great word usage. And it's like it painted a picture in my mind. Great job on this! 5/5 |