No time soon

by lost and forgotten   Sep 29, 2006


\"nothings gunna change any time soon, we can tr..

no shuddup i get it uve condemnd me to doom

no wait theres still a chance

and u can say that just at a glance?
my life is shit uno its tru

but theres still so much we can do
just try a little harder and ull see just how great ur life can be

theres no better way i can see
thats it ive had it im to far gone

the world doesnt hate u uve done nothing wrong

dont stand there and sing that song
ino ur type
and it gives me the shits
thats it ive had it im callin it quits

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    That's pretty deep dude,

  • 17 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    That was rlly different. i like the way you write. nice vocablary, also.

  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Yeh i agree i really liked the syle and flow of it. well done

  • 18 years ago

    by struggling

    This is great.I love it.5/5.great job.xxx
    ~Shareeda~

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    I really enjoyed the style and flow of your poem, well done.
    Godbless
    Sammib