"I see where this is gone, yes I do."
[this 'has' gone. or this is 'going']

"I can not do much about it though."
[cannot]

"Let you have, a few wise tails so you learn?"
[Tails are found on animals, 'tales' are stories]

LMAO, this poem was out of this world, and I mean that in a car crash sort of way. I was so confused, but it still all made sense! How the heck does that work!? Haha, omg! Well, I must say, a very good write, you got me laughing, so it had to be a good poem. Not saying I'm an all depressed kid, but poetry that makes me laugh is hard to find. Most of them just make me smile. Haha, oh man! That was great.

Wow.
Took two reads but i liked it.
Haha.
I'm giggling over it o.O
Well done.
Indeed i loved the end [ I'm back at one. Back to when I was no-one.] Made me think haha.
Well doooooone [:

A very good poem, a bit long for my liking, and maybe a bit dry, I just got a bit bored while reading it 4/5 don't take me wrong it was lovely

Omg i love it!! it's like so flippin true!! if i'm getting this message right, no one takes teenagers seriously, nor their opinions... that's what i got out of it, and i think it's sooooooo flipping true!!! great job i totally give you a 5/5!!

Wonderful job my little Hen, I love random poems like this hehehehehe it made me giggle 5/5 ;0

Loved it, made me giggle haha. Good Job!
5/5

LMFAO...ive never read shakespeare but this is what i picture it would be like lmao...and u want to know something i noticed?

Let's break it down now, shall I not? Ten words shall do!
"A juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity."

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity...great line but only 9 words :P

haha u kill me 10/5 =)

Hahah pish posh. i can dig it.

Good popem! how did u think of it!!!!

How did you put this together?? perplexing but worth it.. very very good, enjoyed reading your stuff xx

=)tehee.
Very amusing..with some great lines on it.
5/5

I'm the best truth-be-told.
^ ha i love that part

cute poem =]