King Of Lies

Oh God what have I done?
This time I've truly failed you
So much in me's gone wrong
These good intentions turned askew

Though I tell myself to cry
And I will my tears to fall
My anger lashes out at me
My back's now to the wall

I'm losing grip on everything
You're slowly slipping away
Your heart it doesn't long for me
No love there to portray

All foolishness aside
All feelings tightly bound
I'm bemused by your perplexity
"King of Lies" you should be crowned

No morals and no pride
No feelings and no shame
You're cold and condescending
The King I do proclaim

With jesters for your friends
And I'm the Queen that's by your side
In a Kingdom of broken promises
The two of us reside

The sun it fails to shine
For we know no peace at heart
A mockery of love we've made
In a world of morbid art

The children do not laugh
For fear of causing pain
This Kingdom is your threshold
Upon with which you reign

The stars they show no willingness
The man has left the moon
I've given up on fighting it
To your hate I am immune

So show me that we're ruined
There's no more love I do surmise
You will not give me your honesty
So I crown you, my 'King Of Lies.'

I love this poem. Its the best i think i've ever written. Please comment. I need to hear if i suck, or if this poem is worthy.