His poison

by RachiBubbles   Sep 29, 2006


His Poison

You came around at the perfect time
Proved me wrong, but I wish you were mine.
Instead you are hers
Why cant I be yours?

As you held me oh so sweet
My heart began to beat.
His poison, so strong
The moment felt as if I belong.

His was so nice to smell
But what we did, I wont tell.
How could I have imagined this?
It only began with a kiss.

His lips so sweet
Makes my life complete.
His hands so filling
That I was only willing.

The poison left over
There is no special clover,
The poison so thick,
I love it, because it doesnt make me sick.

By, Rachael

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  • 16 years ago

    by jeffery sechrest

    Well written i like it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This is an "okay" poem... i get a little confused when ready some of the lines such as "You came around at the perfect time
    Proved me wrong,"

    you might wanna add why you were proved wrong and thats about it.. it could use a little work... i wouldve liked to read a little more about how your feeling.. maybe some stronger words ... all in all its about a 3 or 4 but i voted it a 5 anyway to boost up your rating =)

  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    Awww cute poem

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