This is an "okay" poem... i get a little confused when ready some of the lines such as "You came around at the perfect time
Proved me wrong,"
you might wanna add why you were proved wrong and thats about it.. it could use a little work... i wouldve liked to read a little more about how your feeling.. maybe some stronger words ... all in all its about a 3 or 4 but i voted it a 5 anyway to boost up your rating =)