by Midnight Sun Sep 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My mind melts with your satin words |
by Dan Ryan
This one caught my attention right away because of the first line, "my mind melts with your satin words" that first line is so important. The only stanza that didn't flow was the forth one and I really liked the ending |
by Michelle18
Wow...ur an excellent writer...good poem! |
by Gem
Outstanding... |
by *Charisma*
WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!! That was totally amazing, awesome, super, outstanding! I LOVED THAT POEM! That was really great. Perfect words and rhymes. I loved it! Jpoet* |