Comments : A Trampled Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Aww, i like it. a lot. and i hope you find someone =)

  • Hey beautiful poem.
    you've done a amazing job on the rhyming. The last two lines could use some work with the flow, though i like the idea of the dove being (portrayed?) as a dove.
    well done, love :] MeL

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Awww this is a really beautiful poem. i like this one a lot. you did a really great job writing this. keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short but very clear poem. Great ending. Your vocab was a little bit too basic and so were the rhymes. Keep it up