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by Tawny   Sep 29, 2006


I can't be without you anymore,
Your all that I ever wish for.
If you don't want to be with me, tell me so,
I will stop wondering and will finally know.
It seems like all your feelings for me,
Somehow aren't like they used to be.
I already know what your going to say,
Something like, "I've come to a conclusion since the other day."
I know that's how it's going to start,
And it'll end up, "but you'll always be in my heart."
Say good-bye and let it be done,
And behind a cloud will go the sun.
Yet my days will be dark and bad,
I promise I'll remember all the good times we've had.
So I guess we're finished and it's come to a stop,
All because of my dad being a cop.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good. The overall flow was constant as well. You may want to use less fill words. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Umm i have no idea what you were talking about in there poem. it really confused me, but it might just have been me, i dont know. but the rhyming was really good.