by Tawny Sep 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I can't be without you anymore, |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good. The overall flow was constant as well. You may want to use less fill words. Keep it up |
by Kristina
Umm i have no idea what you were talking about in there poem. it really confused me, but it might just have been me, i dont know. but the rhyming was really good. |