Windows - haiku

by Katie   Sep 29, 2006


My windows
become mirrors
at night.

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I got an error saying this was to short for a poem. I guess they didn't consider haiku when they made that rule. Sometimes smaller is better.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kitsune

    Darling though its a nice poem, a Haiku consists of 3 lines, which you have. The only issue is the first and last are to have 5 sylabols, and the middle to have 7. So maybe something like..

    my pane glass windows
    become beautiful mirrors
    during the dark night..

    But 5/5 on creativity =3

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