End friendship!

by ** plum snow **   Sep 29, 2006


Tears fall...

at the end of it all!

Hope has fleeted... love depleated. "What is it for?" screamed as i fell to the floor. I gave u my all, but now all i can do is fall. I was always there when u came calling...

Now whos there to catch me...

when im falling? =[

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A neat poem...I think you have great talent and so much potential...one suggestion is that I think your poems would have more impact on the reader if organized into more structured stanzas. but don't get me wrong! I love your stuff!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by ** plum snow **

    Thanks jpoet, but i preferr a disjointed form... it expresses my mood better!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Hope has fleeted... love depleated.
    i liked that line...a suggestion is to put your poem in stanzas though so we can read it easier! Just a thought. Jpoet*

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