It is a great poem, but emotion shwing in it, it is so greatly written.
title should be
"when You Told Me Your Truth"
or
"Why I believed you"

overall a 5/5 from me.

Okay then he broke your heart or the speaker's heart. Well so what? Where's the pain coming through the words and the sadness? Where's the oringality or poetic words? Where is what could make this poem stand out? Where is it? You need to find what it is that is inside you and write it darn it write it! It is then that you can capture a reader's emotions and throw it back at them with your words.

I can relate to this poem in a way. It's so messed up when people do crap like that. As far as titles go, maybe "Change of Heart" or possibly something along those lines?

I thought the flow was a little off, and that made me have to read it through more than once. After I had read it through, though, I thought I could relate very closely. VERY closely. If you ever need to talk, I ish here. =) Great write. Keep it up...you're getting there. Keep that chin up. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Oh my. This was very sad. I'm so sorry if this really happened to you. It's hard when it happens and you're not sure what you've done.

The poem was written nicely though. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Another great poem of yours.... i really like it and i was enjoyed reading. thansk for sharing and keep on writing poems god bless u always 4/9

Aww that feeling is terrible. I like this poem though, the flow is a bit rough, but overall it was still nicely written. Keep it up. =]

Yeaaaa....This has happend to me before. Sucks. ;| I like the poem though. Good point and story to it. ^^