Friday

by just_genes   Sep 30, 2006


The air is humid in Petaling Jaya
I walk in bare feet
as if through steamy broth.
The house is silent,
But outside is birdsong
and the sound of someone digging.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leslie

    I like this. You can feel how its steadily calm and controlled. it's this one of those poems where your intentionally just observing a moment.
    good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow.. Oo. Nicely done!

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very tranquil, deep peom. It reminds of poems that are in or based on a story or lesson.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very nice, your short poems are well crafted.

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