Comments : Postcoital

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, but still enchanting poem. You could explain what she's waiting for using lot of imagery.

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow.. I liked this one a lot. The emotion.. and depth. Nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Beautiful, sensory, sensual, emotional.Againn-simplly stated yet deeper.A touch of longing and expectations.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka