Comments : On the Roadside

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Hmmm.interesting short poem.
    "I found a plant that
    Reacts to touch."
    "Fronds curl away from my toe."

    so much mystery here..
    and I like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was great. The last line though.. "Childhood imagining" ..For some weird twisted reason inside of my head, I think it might work better if you had "Childhood imagination" ..That's up to you though. :]

    Nicely done nonetheless. I liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Short sweet flowing rare natural imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Very nice insight and flow. Great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like the simplicity and pure beauty of this.Well done.It says more than it first appears.I love the ending.

    Gary Jurechka

    P.s.-thanks for the comments on my work.Please contact me via personal message as I have a topic I'd appreciate your comment on.Thanks.
    G.J.