by Misstress
Hmmm.interesting short poem. |
by Natalie
This was great. The last line though.. "Childhood imagining" ..For some weird twisted reason inside of my head, I think it might work better if you had "Childhood imagination" ..That's up to you though. :] |
Short sweet flowing rare natural imagery |
Very nice insight and flow. Great work! |
I like the simplicity and pure beauty of this.Well done.It says more than it first appears.I love the ending. |