The love of the wind

by Letty   Sep 30, 2006


I listen carefully when the wind blows as it whispers soft-spoken words of love.

The words strongly pull and tug at my aching heart until they gain my response.

The wind then lightly brushes its loving touch against my face. I momentarily become lost in its sweet caress as the heartache begins to fade.

It then loudly hums to create a song that I know was made for me alone.

I then melt in its arms because of the lyrics, of the song, until the heartache is completely gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Hey Letty--

    The imagery on this poem was beautiful, as I'm sure many people have already mentionned. I wish I was able to give you some constructive criticism, as you have helped me so much, but there really isn't a single thing in this poem that I would change. You're talented, and very creative.

    --Jaime

  • 18 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awww i like it it is good you are a great writer keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Beautiful poem. great imagery. 5/5 keep up the good work:)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Great poem, I really like it!

    ~Angel of Secrets~

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow another excellent poem. 5/5

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