Oh my.....absolutely beautiful sad penned you potray here, writing with beautiful emotions..

This is beautioful... exsquisit. i too, write abit, but not as well as this.. check my stuff out.. but this is truely beautoful
-Marina

Hey. I saw the score for your poem, and I thought I could come check it out. Sometimes there's reason for anything below 4 or 5; however this time there was not. That deserves more than you have right now. I love how nothing was pointed out too much, because you left the story itself up to the reader to decide. This is a great way to write, I believe, because it's much easier for readers to connect if they're able to put themselves into the poem - and the way you left the background information open to any whom want to decipher ...or better yet create it, was amazing. Great write!