That was an amazing poem but...i don't think i'll ever be able to say goodbye to the people that i've lost
auna

I love this. amazing babe. thanks for the cmmt! :]

5/5

This is a very good write. Your words ring so true. Great job!

Wow.. this is a really great poem.. nice flow.. great job.. and thanks for the comment on mine

HELLO!
i'm that thirteen year old girl who wrote "Speed".This poem is amazing!Are you sure you're thirteen? (: Hard to believe.

Yeah im sure i'm 13 lol. Aww thanx to everyone that has commented this poem! It means so much to me. = ]
xxBonniexx

I'm deffinatly impressed. Your writing is amazing.

Aww so sad. =[ It's a really good poem. I like it. =] Thanks for your comment from before.

Dis poem is soo cute lubb it
ooh and thanx for da comment on mah poems

This poem was really good.
i loved the flow and rhyme...
it made me really sad :(
good work.

thanks for the comment.

Yeah I like this poem, it is so sad but so true, I liked how you described words in here. Although, I think you should dedicate it to people that have lost a girl... because you mention a girl is it. lol but who cares really, I know what you mean and so does everyone else.
love it
Hidden xx

Ps you must comment ALOT OF PEOPLE because they all say thanks for ur comment LOL
hmmm smart but yet cheaky
=D

^.^

omg btw THANKS FOR UR COMMENT!
LOL

Hellooo Bonnie xx
i like i like
your so talented andd
guess what
im sitting right next to you
arnnt i jsut to coolest? haa
love from yourr frinedss Jessica

Beautiful poem!
I luvd it i hv tears in mi eyes 2!
u hv a real gift
neva stop doin wat u do
wit much luv
AMORyPAZ

I love this Poem! I never lost anyone the close to me but i did move a little over a year ago:( I left behind my my best friend and my dad which was one of the hardest thing i have ever had to do well i had no choice to move or not but the goodbye was one thing i will never forget. I just left my dad without sayin goodbye because i didn't wanna hurt him and my best friend well i gotta say that was the hardest thing she was alwayz there for me and now i was leavin her i hated myself for that. thanks for the poem it awesome!!

Hey you are really good and this poem came out excelent keep up the good work

thanks for the comment on 9/11 you should read some of my other work

OMFG has 2 b 1 of da best poems i've eva read! I'm mean it
u no dis poem does really capture wat u feel
wen sum1 u luv dies 2 weeks hv past n ppl
start 2 treat lyk they use 2 it seems lyk ppl wanna 4get but inside every1 still cries u hv ur gud days ur bad most of dem r bad but u can't believe dat u actually lost dat person
da pai neva really goes away
i luv ur poem &
luv ya
Andrea!

Heyyyyy Girlllieee:):)
even though this is urr tihngy im wrting it for you
its jess everyonee not "Makaveli"
dont you think she pretty hardcoree
ii doo
keep commenting
im out
x

Wooooowwww, that was amazing! 5/5, totally!

Lovely poem hun!!...very beautifully portrayed with emotions filled in the lines..
just Beautiful!..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx