Wow great poem! i love how it flows:)
great job.

This poem was full of feeling, almost had a hypnotic effect towards the end, it was really great :) keep it up, this poem was amazing
bear hugs and lollipops,
jess x

Hey, this poem is pretty good! I can feel your anger and frustration as I read it! Nice job!

This has a lot of feeling put into it. Very nice.

Wow dude, u really know how 2 xpress urself man.

This is very deep 5/5