by Natalie Mar 14, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
He would make me feel special, |
by Natalie
lol :) glad you liked it xXxXxXxXx |
by lawrence
haha Natalie! the last bit in your poem really had me tumbling to the ground and laughing with stitches!!! the whole poem started so lovingly and dreamy, "he would give me pet names, like babe and honey." wuz thinking in my mind "awe, that;s so sweet!" and that you are one lucky gal to have found such a guy! had me grinning from ear to ear as i read from line to line. that is, till i hit the last verse!!! there on, the grin went all around my head and i simply flipped back in hysterical laughter! no such thing as a perfect guy huh? well, you haven't met me yet! LOL! well done! love this! FIVE! |