Great poem. Beautiful && sweet. The words you used were simply amazing. I loved how the last two lines in each stanza rhymed, that was a great added touch to the poem. [5/5]. Great job && Take care

Gently feed this condemned man your love
Passionately allowing me to swallow your touch
^^
OMG ....This just melted my heart and turned it to mush ...

Your love poetry is food for my soul ....and I can never seem to get enough of it .
Sad ones, happy ones it doesn't matter they all hit my heart and make me go Awwww.....

Take care, my friemd