by *Charisma*
This is soooo sad. i hope you're okay. glad you are letting it out in poetry. the Bible offers much comfort...Jpoet* |
by Keath
A good poem overall. The beginning is not so interesting but when the poem carries on its getting better with every line. It’s quite touchy, true, has a beautiful ending and you’ve got a nice rhythm. So 5/5 after all. |