Comments : Dear Mother

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This is soooo sad. i hope you're okay. glad you are letting it out in poetry. the Bible offers much comfort...Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    A good poem overall. The beginning is not so interesting but when the poem carries on its getting better with every line. It’s quite touchy, true, has a beautiful ending and you’ve got a nice rhythm. So 5/5 after all.