Comments : You Always Catch My Eye

  • 18 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    Yet another wonderful poem about the unspoken thoughts in her heart...

    lyl, rixx

  • 18 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Bad rikki... BAD

  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    Thanks for your comments! I love thi8sn poem. The rhyme is flawless. It all works well and feels right.

    I especially like the lines

    I'm trying to understand this feeling,
    And why I do this to myself,
    You seem to have my head reeling,
    With a simple smile and nothing else,