Where Peace Exists

Sarah, this was beautiful sad penned you potray here, sorry if you feel this way, stay strong girl, you never know what will happen for tomorrow...take care,......

note; pls say hi to someone, perhaps you know her "hailie" i miss her.

This was so sad...full of emotion. It was short but there was so much feeling put into this. I'm sorry if you really feel this way....its not a pleasant feeling....I hope things work out! Take lotsa care!!!!! Love youuuu

- Poetess

So my mother can bleed in pain, I wish
Because I hate her.

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I can really relate to this poem, and those lines above. I love my mother with all my heart, but only because she is my mum, I don't like who she is as a person.

I hope you honestly don't feel this way. It was such a sad poem. Very nicely written though. I like how at the end you just repeated that same line twice, it really gave the poem that different kind of effect. Awesome job! 5/5

Natalie``

I love this and i know how you feel.....i felt the same way....my mom always wants to be apart of my life and she has done too much to hurt me! i cant take her sometimes!! great poem! if ya need to talk you can email me im always here for ya
Amanda