I love this and i know how you feel.....i felt the same way....my mom always wants to be apart of my life and she has done too much to hurt me! i cant take her sometimes!! great poem! if ya need to talk you can email me im always here for ya
Amanda

So my mother can bleed in pain, I wish
Because I hate her.

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I can really relate to this poem, and those lines above. I love my mother with all my heart, but only because she is my mum, I don't like who she is as a person.

I hope you honestly don't feel this way. It was such a sad poem. Very nicely written though. I like how at the end you just repeated that same line twice, it really gave the poem that different kind of effect. Awesome job! 5/5

Natalie``

This was so sad...full of emotion. It was short but there was so much feeling put into this. I'm sorry if you really feel this way....its not a pleasant feeling....I hope things work out! Take lotsa care!!!!! Love youuuu

- Poetess

Sarah, this was beautiful sad penned you potray here, sorry if you feel this way, stay strong girl, you never know what will happen for tomorrow...take care,......

note; pls say hi to someone, perhaps you know her "hailie" i miss her.